Conflict: Man Versus ?????????????????

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I nearly had an anxiety attack when I signed into my Gotham Writer’s Workshop class today and realized that I have been assigned to post my work NEXT WEEK!  At GWW, you turn in two longer pieces for critique, so it’s kind of like having to take your mid-term after just one lesson.  I basically have two options at this point, continue with the piece that I started in the first class or start something new.  The problem with my old piece is that I still haven’t really worked out the conflict, yet.  So, all afternoon I have been conflicted over conflict, er.

“There is no reason why good cannot triumph as often as evil. The triumph of anything is a matter of organization. If there are such things as angels, I hope that they are organized along the lines of the Mafia.”  - Kurt Vonnegut, The Sirens of Titans

Sometimes getting back to the basics eases my need to breathe into a brown paper bag.  Approximately 2 seconds of Internet research triggers memories from Freshman English Class…there are two types of conflict: Internal and External.  I think that most good stories have both.

According to Aristotle, in order to hold the interest, the hero must have a single conflict; let’s take a look at some options…

Seven Basic Conflicts (via wikipedia)

  1. Man v. Man - A conflict arising between two or more characters of the same kind.
  2. Man v. Nature - A character pitted against one or more forces of nature.  It is also commonly found in stories about survival in remote locales.
  3. Man v. Machine - A conflict between a character and an artificial entity such as a computer, robot, or android. The emphasis is on contrasting the character as a natural organism with a synthetic creature.
  4. Man v. Self- An internal conflict involving a character wrestling with conflicting emotions, thoughts, or desires.
  5. Man v. Supernatural - A character at odds with elements outside of the natural realm. These include encounters with ghosts, extraterrestrials, and other speculative or theoretical phenomena.
  6. Man v. Society - A conflict between bad and good.
  7. Man v. Destiny - A character attempting to break free from a future path chosen without his or her consent.

Do you have a favorite type of narrative conflict to write/read about?

Does blog writing count as procrastinating? hmmmm…..

Writing Tips from a Commitment-Phobe

Hello!

I am rested, relaxed and feeling particularly motivated.  This year has been all about new things for me and I am happy to report that this has been my most successful year for accomplishing New Year’s resolutions (it’s only April so knock on wood).  One of which is to dedicate more time to writing and reading.  My daytime job keeps me pretty nomadic (which is what I like to blame my commitment phobia on), as one would suspect, the hardest part for me is to find the time. So here are the 4 steps I am taking to help make writing a more regular part of my life:

  1. Start a new blog
  2. Sign up for classes
  3. Block out time on my calendar
  4. Write every day.

Rationale:  1. I have this theory that if I tell the world about it, then I will do it.  check.  2. I take homework seriously.  And I love school; I am a nerd.  I just signed up for my second class at Gotham Writer’s Workshop.  check.  3. If something is on my cal then it’s real.  I think most clearly in the early morning or late at night, depending on what I did that day.  I am really going to try and stick with an early morning routine.  I marked off time everyday, in different amounts of minutes.  check.   4. Only time will tell, but I am off to a good start today ^-^

Here is some inspiration for the day (that I totally ripped off of Brainpickings) from Mr. Kurt Vonnegut himself.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmVcIhnvSx8&feature=player_embedded

8 tips on how to write a good short story according to Kurt Vonnegut:

  1. Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
  2. Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
  3. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
  4. Every sentence must do one of two things-reveal character or advance the action.
  5. Start as close to the end as possible
  6. Be a Sadist.  No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them-in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
  7. Write to please just one person.  If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia
  8. Give your readers as much information as possible.  To hell with suspense.  Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.

If you have made it this far, THANKS for reading my first blog post.  I am not totally sure what this blog is all about and I am ok with that (commitment-phobes LOVE ambiguity, ha!)  But you can expect posts with regularity on: literature, travel, and a plethora of random topics that I might be “researching” for something that I am writing.  Oh, and my tastes range from Kurt Vonnegut to Amanda Hocking, so you have been warned!

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